Even through this is a loop I feel like it could use more depth and use a softer snare.
Even through this is a loop I feel like it could use more depth and use a softer snare.
Thanks for the feedback! This was just an introductory song, I promise that in future compositions I will improve and try to make better and better compositions! :3
It's too random and inconsistent with quality.
Well, my music is supposed to be random on purpose. It's just how I make my music. I don't mind feedback and all, but to say it's inconsistent with quality is a bit too degrading. The point of it is to just keep people thinking of what they heard, yet still likable in a sense.
It's a little empty.
Yeah I know, I consider this one bad too
A little too simple, could use a better melody too.
Thanks for the review! The melody sucks because the original song is the saddest (in my opinion) song in sth, also im too inept to make anything good. But I'm happy to get any kind of feedback!
This is way too simple.
oh yeah I totally understand how simple it is, it took me 20 minutes\
yeah I just started out, save my soul
thanks for the review, ill try to make stuff that isnt too simple
The track while a little simple sounds okay, you used AI to write the commentary didn't you?
Thanks for the comment! I'm curious, when you say it's simple, would you just expect more layers instruments/depth, a longer track, more variety, all the above? Yep, you got me (AI). I fed ChatGPT a chunk of thoughts I had about how to describe it and then it played off that. When it comes to music, the things I struggle with the most are: lyrics, descriptions, and titles. I have a lot of things I've written, some more complete, and some just fragments of ideas, that sit around with just the date as their title. I'm trying to use posting online as a motivator to get me to more fully complete some of my pieces.
What was I expecting.
A song with bass pounding into my ears
This is hype!
Thank you!
The olny thing saving you from a lower rating is the fact that this is ment to be a loop, otherwise the sound design is too simple at it lacks atmosphere.
ok thank you for your opinion, and Hey what do you expect from a Novice song producer.
I make bad music, shocker.
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